~sibyll

Wow! You really are a brilliant poet, aren't you?

Why don't you join the poetry contest from [link] ?


It's free and every nitwit such as myself who enters gets a small gift

but someone like you might win one of their $10 000 or $100 000 prizes.

Just saying hi. Saw you on the forums. Keep up the good work for Planned Parenthood.

Greetings from the Random deviant-er!

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Tell me of your adventures outside of the Internet sometime, hm?

fissplaps@gmail.com or Drunk Politics on AIM if you ever get the time.

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I MISS YA

hey, you seem like the kind of person who will tell someone the ugly truth. I'd like you to check out my poem Synchronicity and tell me what you think. I need some constructive criticism and would be very grateful.

ps Be as harsh and brutal as possible.

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thanks, but credit goes to = derivablezero.

hehe. you have the best avatar ever...i'm partial to elaborate visual puns.

So, I finally got a list up and running for the Link of the Night. If you're not on it (as in, don't get this message, and you want to), shoot me a note, or leave a message or just somehow let me know. Same goes for the instance that you want off the list - please let me know.

Happiness, by .
The Interview, by .
Rusting Bridges of Suburbia, by .

So, I did some peruzing, and earthed up these three pieces.
Happiness is beautiful in its own simplicity, and has a subtle kick to it that I find lacking in a lot of reading these days.
The Interview is an interesting little for-the-stage piece that I found myself cracking up over, all over the place. There's some great humor and dialogue going on here, as well as some great subtle toss-ins for the actors to experiment with. Something I would love to see performed.
While Rusting Bridges of Suburbia might be a little ho-hum subject-wise, the rhythm and control of meter that ~ honestbrutality has accomplished here is impeccable. It takes a lot of practice and a lot of control of vocabulary to get a good rhythm in a slam piece these days, and it's done beautifully here.



Get writing, fuckos. *jesusbite

Due to me getting involved in a bunch of shit, and being a lazy twat, there is no more "nightly" thing going for the LotN. I should call it "Link of the WheneverJesusbiteGetsOffHisAss" as it would be more truthful.

I've been delving into prose as of lately, as I'm getting back into the habit of reading and writing. These two caught my eye and I need to pimp them.

Vodkagina - [link] - by
"Once..." - [link] - by

And, of course, send feedback to because he likes it when people do that. And he's horny, too.


(PS: I plan on trying to get back on the ball with this, at least as a bi-weekly habit from now own, if not weekly. If you're not on the list (read: didn't get this message) and want to, please note me and request to be put on the list. I'll get right on it.)

where are you all this time?

can you come trash me? or give me some feedback... after reading undefinability's rampage, I have this aching for my own personal abuse.... & since I saw you & your other friends in a sort of pack of dogs manner tear up that other chick's writing (though indeed, i thought it was crap as well... the crossing the street shite) i thought you could do it to me. i have an ego problem and want to feel as shit like as possible... so yeah. poetry would be best, there's a lot of crap there, but where-ever you want.


i'm feeling slightly sarcastic, though i lack the humor gene, so probably don't come across that way... i think undefinability's a dick, but i felt inebriate's comments were somewhat constructive. and now i'm looking to be abused.

ciao.

nicole

love the avatar

woo looks like someones been busy.
but in other news... my leftover sub from saturday.
i dont think the mayo on it was good anymore.
:barf:

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isweartofuckingod never again.

Hahaha Jesus, dude. Fuckin' seriously.

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how am i the bad guy?
"you and your pansy ass little girlfriend can lick my hairy nutsack."
what did i do?

i'm not that bad guy. you are most certainly the bad guy.

you noted me because you didn't want to look like the bad guy... i sincerely was apologizing... if you can't except that that's not my fault.

you didn't apologize. an apology is a gracious thing. you said 'haha i bet she is crying in her room alone. i know! i'll rub it in a little deeper.' and i noted you because personally, i would rather not have ugly things smeared all over my front page, my poetry, and your girlfriend's poetry.

nice way to accept an appology. you have some issues. and you just proved that my comment about who you are is true.

"you and your pansy ass little girlfriend can lick my hairy nutsack. you know not a goddamn thing about me. the poem that you spent so long criticizing and used to make value judgements about my person isn't even ABOUT ME. the thing about writing is NOT EVERYTHING HAS TO BE FROM A PERSONAL POINT OF VIEW. i don't see where you get off criticizing my use of the english language when yours is less than stellar.

so, go crawl into a hole and die, you arrogant little prick."

not brave enough to say that without using a note...

i wasn't using what it was about to judgments about you i used the way it was written...

and you started this whole thig so don't even try to make me look like the badguy.

i wasn't hurt. i have a life outside of DA. you should try it sometime.